I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hey Tane, nice job on your sentence but make sure you add more sentences and I think you forgot the title but I like the emojis you done even though I really don't know how to type in emojis great job Tane!
Hi Tane, Kareem here and I am from Rata class, I like how you put the emoticons because they look cool and I like how the emoticons look like what you are doing. You could put a capital at the start and make the post bigger so you can put more information. That is all for today, Bye bye
Hi Tane, Ethan here from tawa class and I like how you said that the lock'in load part was fun and then you put a full stop. It cool how you put some faces of the martial arts and running.Next time maybe put a Capital letter for 'the' and maybe more infomation about martial arts.So I better blog you later bye!
Hi Tane Courtney here!just saying you need more words and punctuation but its realy nice any ways you need to take out the emojis and put pictures and put capitals and put your capitals for name
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hi tane I love it so mach but need some things bye now tane.
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ReplyDeleteI like how you put the emojis in. Maybe next time you could do more then one sentence
-Nalanee
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ReplyDeleteHey Tane, nice job on your sentence but make sure you add more sentences and I think you forgot the title but I like the emojis you done even though I really don't know how to type in emojis great job Tane!
ReplyDeleteHi Tane,
ReplyDeleteKareem here and I am from Rata class, I like how you put the emoticons because they look cool and I like how the emoticons look like what you are doing. You could put a capital at the start and make the post bigger so you can put more information.
That is all for today,
Bye bye
Hi Tane,
ReplyDeleteEthan here from tawa class and I like how you said that the lock'in load part was fun and then you put a full stop. It cool how you put some faces of the martial arts and running.Next time maybe put a Capital letter for 'the' and maybe more infomation about martial arts.So I better blog you later bye!
Hi Tane Courtney here!just saying you need more words and punctuation but its realy nice any ways you need to take out the emojis and put pictures and put capitals and put your capitals for name
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