I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi this is Stephanie and I really like how you put in a condiment and sodium is salt but you can add more things about sodium, Did you think about the condiments? you can add more types of salt like, Sea salt, and etc,
Kia ora Tane it's Azire from Gilberthorpe school i like this because you got a red line thing so that people could spot it straight away and not have to look for it.Did you think about making it not so bleary so that people could understand. Make sure next time you try and preview it before you post.
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Hi this is Stephanie and I really like how you put in a condiment and sodium is salt but you can add more things about sodium, Did you think about the condiments? you can add more types of salt like, Sea salt, and etc,
ReplyDeleteKia ora Tane it's Azire from Gilberthorpe school i like this because you got a red line thing so that people could spot it straight away and not have to look for it.Did you think about making it not so bleary so that people could understand. Make sure next time you try and preview it before you post.
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