I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia Ora Tane, I really like your post, But I to be honest I think you need to update it and fix the writing problems, But I really like how you put the first dance we did in practise for the comparison of Before And After.
Kia Ora Tane. I like your blog post about dancing like the stars it was so fun doing practising but I could not go. Maybe next time before uploading a blog post with a video you could make sure it works??
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Kia Ora Tane, I really like your post, But I to be honest I think you need to update it and fix the writing problems, But I really like how you put the first dance we did in practise for the comparison of Before And After.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Tane.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about dancing like the stars it was so fun doing practising but I could not go.
Maybe next time before uploading a blog post with a video you could make sure it works??
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