I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thanks for sharing some information about the short video we watched. I like how you also included a photo of Chris Hadfield the astronaut. I wonder if you could have another look at this post and add some capital letters and punctuation on the ends of your sentences? This is what we have been working on in our writing lessons.
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Kia ora Tane
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing some information about the short video we watched. I like how you also included a photo of Chris Hadfield the astronaut. I wonder if you could have another look at this post and add some capital letters and punctuation on the ends of your sentences? This is what we have been working on in our writing lessons.
- Miss Birtch