I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I like how put your info on a DLO. I wonder if you could have done the text different so it would be easier to read?
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Awesome sharing your daily activities Tane!
ReplyDeleteI like how put your info on a DLO. I wonder if you could have done the text different so it would be easier to read?
Remember, when you are posting to your blog we want to see your writing skills. Try to remember to add a sentence or two to introduce your post. Maybe think about adding in why you are writing on your blog or what the purpose of the task is.
- Miss Birtch