I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Ka pai Tane. I am very impressed with this blog about Ahmed. He is truly a hero, saving a lot of women from the gunman. I hope that his shoulder recovers and he can use his hand again. Keep up the awesome work. Mrs Hastie
Hi Tane. One thing you should do for this is change the background because of the colour you can't see the writing. I think you should keep it simple and make the background white and the writing black.
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Ka pai Tane. I am very impressed with this blog about Ahmed. He is truly a hero, saving a lot of women from the gunman.
ReplyDeleteI hope that his shoulder recovers and he can use his hand again.
Keep up the awesome work.
Mrs Hastie
Hi Tane.
ReplyDeleteOne thing you should do for this is change the background because of the colour you can't see the writing. I think you should keep it simple and make the background white and the writing black.