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Monday 3 July 2017

1. fidget spinners should Not be allowed in  
 Gilberthorpe school  because  They can Distract you in your Learning because you could look at it  too much.

2. No they are very distracting to people   

3. Look at them too much
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14 comments:

  1. Unknown3 July 2017 at 10:11

    I like the way you have used paragraphs here Tane. Next time go back through and check you have all of your capital letters in the correct places.

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  2. Anonymous28 July 2017 at 12:00

    Hola Tane Chelsea her.
    I like this because it is what you think about it but some people what to have fidget spinners at school. Next time you can say more things about fidget spinners.
    See ya.

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  3. Anonymous28 July 2017 at 12:00

    i like your slide tana keep it up by bailey

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  4. Anonymous28 July 2017 at 12:04

    Hey Tane, I like how you have put this on your blog it looks really cool. I really agree with that it can be distracting and they were supposed to be used for fidgeting but they seem to be a toy now. Maybe next time you should put som photos n.

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  5. Anonymous28 July 2017 at 12:05

    Bonjour Tane, Aryan here from Rimu Class!
    I do agree that they do distract some people but they do help people think.
    Remember capitals and grammar next time.
    Anyways blog you later!

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  6. Anonymous28 July 2017 at 12:07

    Ni hao
    I akshay disagree with you if you have no fidget spinners your hands and dishrack other people but fidget spinners are pely see a ball when you spin it.
    bye from me

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  7. Anonymous28 July 2017 at 12:07

    Hi Tane, Tobey here.
    This is a great idea and a good thing to debate about.
    Next time can you make sure it makes sense.
    BYE!

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  8. Anonymous28 July 2017 at 12:15

    Hi Tane, TJ here.
    I really like fidget spinner but fidget spinner are really fun to play with they should be allowed to play in school next time can you make sure it makes sense bye now.

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  9. Anonymous28 July 2017 at 12:15

    G'day mate
    Chloe here
    I love how you have made this in your own opinion.
    Yes I do agree with Roxy I think these are becoming a toy not a figet spiner that helps.I think that this is a great idea thanks for sharing it with us.
    Why do u think they distract us?
    Is it the feling of it spining or is it the look?
    This is great work next time make sure it makes sence.
    Catch you later bye

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  10. Anonymous2 August 2017 at 11:58

    hi im isaiah
    i like how you put full stops and capital letters

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  11. Anonymous2 August 2017 at 12:01

    Hi Tane
    I like your doc about fidget spinners. Next time put capital letters in the right place.

    -Nalanee

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  12. Anonymous2 August 2017 at 12:05

    hi im isaiah
    i agree that fidget spinner should not be at school and i also like your writing

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  13. Anonymous2 August 2017 at 12:09

    Hi im Isaiah.
    Why don't you want fidget spinners in class and why don't you like.Fidget spinners

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  14. Anonymous2 August 2017 at 12:25

    Bonjour,
    Kirsty here
    I like how you have opened your own opinion.
    Have you thought of why we should have fidget spinners at school?
    Or have you ever wanted more than four fidget spinners?
    Also can you make sure it makes sense next time?
    Catch you later bye

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