I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Tane, I am Elham from Rimu class. "Wow" Your slide is really cool because it's about cars and ... I like cars that's why I like your slide. Next time probably put more information when you are writing a blog post. Blog u later!
Hi Tane it's Siyona here from Rimu class just a quchon dose car relat to your leaning next step maby next time explan beter and post some thing that relats to school.
Buenos Diaz Tane Sita here! All of those vechiles look really cool if I went on one of them I would be excited but terrified! I like how on each vechile you added little bits of information and facts on it it gives us more infomation! I also like how you added the name of the vechiles on each slide so we know what it is. I was just wondering... have you ever seen any of these vechiles or been on one before??? Keep up the Fantastic work! Blog ya later!! Bye!!
Hi Tane, Fenix here. I Like the way you used images to tell about which Part of Transport you're talking about. Did you think about changing the Font? To improve, you could say what the Parts of Transport are called. Goodbye!
Hi tane this is Isabella here I liked your transport and it go's to each vehicles and maybe next time you can put the word somewhere else where it is not on the vehicles Anyways bye.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
U have put lot's of pictures that are cool
ReplyDeleteI liked the jet plane because it had a
Car,Jet,Jetboat,
U need more word on the car one but it is great
Bye
Hi tane it me alizae i like it but can you a little bit of more things on there and can you do more words on there ok bye.
ReplyDeleteI like how you put a picheres on it
ReplyDeletemabe next time you mabe not to put to much ands
Hi Tane i like your slide?but you need to put less ands and more . and ' well i still like it. you can do it.bye
ReplyDeleteHi Tane I like your slide next time you could put commas instead of ands. You could also use wow words instead of cool. Commas is this ,
ReplyDeleteHi Tane Tyler here.
ReplyDeleteI like your slide about cool car boat and plane,they look really fast.
Next time could you do something including your work.
Hey tane just telling the pictures are cool but the first one in not a mustang it is a dodge challenger
ReplyDeleteHi Tane, I am Elham from Rimu class.
ReplyDelete"Wow" Your slide is really cool because it's about cars and ... I like cars that's why I like your slide.
Next time probably put more information when you are writing a blog post.
Blog u later!
Hey Tane that car looks swag looks like you no lots about cars
ReplyDeleteHay Tane I like your slides.
ReplyDeletehi Tane could you put some more words so i can do some more writing
ReplyDeleteHi Tane its Camryn.
ReplyDeleteI like the car in the first photo it isn't a mustang but it's
alright keep the good work up bue.
Hi Tane it's Siyona here from Rimu class just a quchon dose car relat to your leaning next step maby next time explan beter and post some thing that relats to school.
ReplyDeletei like how you are into speed but do you have any more ideas about jet bort
ReplyDeleteBuenos Diaz Tane Sita here!
ReplyDeleteAll of those vechiles look really cool if I went on one of them I would be excited but terrified! I like how on each vechile you added little bits of information and facts on it it gives us more infomation! I also like how you added the name of the vechiles on each slide so we know what it is. I was just wondering... have you ever seen any of these vechiles or been on one before???
Keep up the Fantastic work!
Blog ya later!!
Bye!!
HI Tane i like the American muscle .
ReplyDeleteTalofa lava Tane
ReplyDeleteI like all the cars you put there what one is your favorite.
But maby next time you could explan why it is there.
Tofa.
Hi Tane I really loved your slide.
ReplyDeleteNext time you do a slide make sure it make sense.
hello tane me Sophie here.made on this you can say how frast they are
ReplyDeleteand rit things.that is what macks it cool liore this is the end by Sophie....
hey tane lacie here. well done! How long did it take you to make this?
ReplyDeleteHi, Tane you did a great job on your slide. Do you know how the plane flys and the cars work? Let me know when you find out about :D
ReplyDeleteHi Tane, Fenix here.
ReplyDeleteI Like the way you used images to tell about which Part of Transport you're talking about.
Did you think about changing the Font?
To improve, you could say what the Parts of Transport are called.
Goodbye!
hi this is brooklyn I like your slide it is very interesting and fun! from brooklyn.
ReplyDeleteI love your car slides they are really cool from Brooklyn
ReplyDeletehi its me gemeve.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you put the picture to mach the words.
maybe to put more slides
Hi Tane. It's me Payton.
ReplyDeleteI like your cool jet plane and I like your jet boat pictures because it is really fast.
Hi tane this is Isabella here I liked your transport and it go's to each vehicles and maybe next time you can put the word somewhere else where it is not on the vehicles Anyways bye.
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