I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
You have done some really nice artwork here for your comic. I think our student teacher Miss B gave us some great activities to do in our first week back.
Be sure you are checking for where your capital letters and full stops go in your writing part. That would improve your work even more.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Tane
ReplyDeleteYou have done some really nice artwork here for your comic. I think our student teacher Miss B gave us some great activities to do in our first week back.
Be sure you are checking for where your capital letters and full stops go in your writing part. That would improve your work even more.
- Miss Birtch