I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I like the images you have used in your WW1 DLO, they really set the scene for what we are learning about. I would prefer if you did your facts in your own words, I can tell that these are facts from Google, not from what we've been discussing in class.
Please make sure to paraphrase info from online, but using your own ideas is best.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
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ReplyDeleteI like the images you have used in your WW1 DLO, they really set the scene for what we are learning about. I would prefer if you did your facts in your own words, I can tell that these are facts from Google, not from what we've been discussing in class.
Please make sure to paraphrase info from online, but using your own ideas is best.
- Miss Birtch