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Friday, 19 May 2017

my dog’s purpose. My dog is called Ishka.
she gives me kisses a lot  and  i Love her. there was one beach that she loved so much even if she  got wet. she wanted to be having fun in the water. We take her on walks but they are very long. She made me very happy.

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  1. Buenos Diaz Tana! Ashrita here!!
    It was very nice to read this, I like the part where you said she would like to go to her favourite beach. Maybe next time make sure at the start of a sentence it's a capital, same with when you say I it should a capital I.

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  2. Kamusta Tane, I know you will be thankful for having a dog like that maybe you can add more sentences it would be awesome if you add wow words in it but you are good at describing her I think everyone can imagine a dog like that.

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