I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Tane I like the slide you did but make sure you add more words and one of the cars have my little brothers dream car. Great job on your slide with Alizae and Lachlan!
Hey Tane I really like the pictures but you at least a sentence on each slide plus make a little bit more slides. But I really like it.Great job Tane,Lachlan, and Alizae!
Namaste Tane, Emily here. I love all the cars you have put on this slide but is it related to your learning? What did you do this for? Did you do it during your learning time?
Bonjour Tane this is a great slide. What was this slide for and what made you think of doing this? These are some really nice and cool cars. I wonder how the others feel about this slide and what you feel about it. Kai pai nice slide.
Next time you need to put more writing on the slide because it has not much star because i went you to put more because it is on only on 2 slides. I like how you put writing on some slides and because we need to no want you are learning.
Hi Tane, Mikayla K here, cool cars! I like all the pictures but what I don't like is that you don't have much writing, maybe write much more and explane about the cars, good work, Blog you later!
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Hi Tane I like the slide you did but make sure you add more words and one of the cars have my little brothers dream car. Great job on your slide with Alizae and Lachlan!
ReplyDeletehi tane i like the American Muscle .
ReplyDeletehi tane it was a good slided and the 7 car was my fave car in the Earth and it is me tane payton
ReplyDeleteHey Tane I really like the pictures but you at least a sentence on each slide plus make a little bit more slides. But I really like it.Great job Tane,Lachlan, and Alizae!
ReplyDeleteNamaste Tane, Emily here.
ReplyDeleteI love all the cars you have put on this slide but is it related to your learning? What did you do this for? Did you do it during your learning time?
Bonjour Tane this is a great slide. What was this slide for and what made you think of doing this? These are some really nice and cool cars. I wonder how the others feel about this slide and what you feel about it. Kai pai nice slide.
ReplyDeletecool as cars tane the third slide is one of the most fastest cars in the world. that car is in the top five.
ReplyDeleteoh sorry also the 4 slide and the 5 slide is some of the fastest cars in the world.
Deletetane it me alizae I need to tell you somethink I no that I help you but you need to put a and after lachlan's name. sorry for not telling you soon.
ReplyDeleteNext time you need to put more writing on the slide because it has not much star because i went you to put more because it is on only on 2 slides. I like how you put writing on some slides and because we need to no want you are learning.
ReplyDeletei like the american muscle
ReplyDeleteI liked the red car because it is cool and my brothers goallie is red.
ReplyDeleteHi i like the fordmastan
ReplyDeleteHi Tane Milla here from Rata Class.
ReplyDeleteCloud you explain more about it not just the picters?
Well done from Milla :)
Hi Tane it is Lachlan I love your slide but you could put more cars in it
ReplyDeleteHi Tane Nirvana here from Rata Class.
ReplyDeleteCould you explain more about the cars.Is this leaning? And you need more writing. bye
Hi Tane, Mikayla K here, cool cars! I like all the pictures but what I don't like is that you don't have much writing, maybe write much more and explane about the cars, good work,
ReplyDeleteBlog you later!