I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia Ora Tane, Milan here!! Um well with this post you didn't really have a introduction about this post and that with the title it didn't really help with it. Also if you are not going to do a introduction maybe you could put it in you video, alright hopefully you use this for your next post bye.
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good job next time maybe do it introduction
ReplyDeleteHi Tane you did a great job on your screencastify I always fail at those you could make a slide of fast and furious.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Tane, Milan here!!
ReplyDeleteUm well with this post you didn't really have a introduction about this post and that with the title it didn't really help with it. Also if you are not going to do a introduction maybe you could put it in you video, alright hopefully you use this for your next post bye.