I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia Ora Tane. I like your blog post about your mat manners. I like your blog post. Maybe next time you could add capitals, full stops, and you could add a longer part at the top and explain more about what you're doing?
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Kia Ora Tane.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about your mat manners. I like your blog post. Maybe next time you could add capitals, full stops, and you could add a longer part at the top and explain more about what you're doing?
Blog you later.