I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia Ora Tane Trinity and Lacie here, We like your blog post about friendship it is really cool. We like how you put what a good friend is. MAybe next time you could add more about what you are doing so we know what your blog post will be about.
Kia Ora Tane! I like your blog post on friendship! I like that you have your ideas on the definition page, I find that very interesting. Maybe next time you could add more information and make sure it makes sense because it's a little hard to read. From Mikayla.
Good job amy and tane this slide awesome. i like the rainbows. next time i think you should not write to much words because sometimes people don't bother looking at it because its too long.
Kia ora Tane, Christina here! I like your slide because it has the perfect information about a friend or friends i would say but can you please put the font a different colour next time because it is kinda hard to read but other then that its perfect. Blog yah later. #AWESOME ~CHRISTINA.
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Kia Ora Tane Trinity and Lacie here,
ReplyDeleteWe like your blog post about friendship it is really cool. We like how you put what a good friend is. MAybe next time you could add more about what you are doing so we know what your blog post will be about.
Blog you later.
Kia Ora Tane!
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post on friendship! I like that you have your ideas on the definition page, I find that very interesting. Maybe next time you could add more information and make sure it makes sense because it's a little hard to read.
From Mikayla.
Kia orana Tane
ReplyDeleteYour post is awesome I like it and maybe you need to put some Capital letters on your title. Bye!!
LOVE IT TANE!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteGood job amy and tane this slide awesome. i like the rainbows.
ReplyDeletenext time i think you should not write to much words because sometimes people don't bother looking at it because its too long.
Kia ora Tane, Christina here!
ReplyDeleteI like your slide because it has the perfect information about a friend
or friends i would say but can you please put the font a different colour next time because it is kinda hard to read but other then that its perfect.
Blog yah later. #AWESOME ~CHRISTINA.
Hi Tane I love your post
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