I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I like how fully planned out your slides are. You've put lots of details into your plot, characters and main events and I look forward to reading your final version.
I think it's great that you gave the 'figurative language' slides a go, and most of your final sentences are exactly right!! Well done on being independent with this task.
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Hi Tane
ReplyDeleteI like how fully planned out your slides are. You've put lots of details into your plot, characters and main events and I look forward to reading your final version.
I think it's great that you gave the 'figurative language' slides a go, and most of your final sentences are exactly right!! Well done on being independent with this task.
- Miss Birtch