I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
hey Tane this is a good piece of writing next time you could add some question marks because then people know when your doing a question it would make it way better and maybe you could make all of the writing the same coulor but everything else is really goo thanks Tane for sharing your work.
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hey Tane this is a good piece of writing next time you could add some question marks because then people know when your doing a question it would make it way better and maybe you could make all of the writing the same coulor but everything else is really goo thanks Tane for sharing your work.
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