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Thursday, 20 August 2020

world war1



this is my  ww1 that i did in reading today it is about world war 1
cause that is what we had to do for reading

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Tane

    I like the images you have used in your WW1 DLO, they really set the scene for what we are learning about. I would prefer if you did your facts in your own words, I can tell that these are facts from Google, not from what we've been discussing in class.

    Please make sure to paraphrase info from online, but using your own ideas is best.

    - Miss Birtch

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