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Tuesday 17 November 2020

100 word challenge

 hi guys this is my 100 word challenge for the week that i had to do 



Once upon a time there was this really big bubble  that could take you wherever you wanted to go  in the  World. Where would I go? I would go to the north pole. To play in the show and also so help Santa make the Presents for christmas.  And to build show men.  Also to take the Reindeer for a ride and get them warmed up before  Christmas. And i would take  santa's sled for ride  then i would go with santa to drop all of the presents of then i would go back to north pole go back home


2 comments:

  1. Hello Tane it´s Mitchell.
    Your work is very good

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  2. Hello Tane my name is Jesse I really like you blog but next time you could add the photo and you should make the writing smaller because it is really big.

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